Writing was decent, but the whole story felt very rushed and choppy, and was, overall, very cheesy. This is an older category romance, which I don't normally read, so maybe this is typical of other books in the 'Silhouette Desire' line. This is the first book I've read by this author, and since I have many of her books on by TBR because of Kindle freebies - I will give her another shot. My guess is this book is just not her best sample. The story was full of silly misunderstandings, and stubborn and childish behavior from both hero and heroine.